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Bonsoir quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger les fautes d'orthographe mais également d'expression c'est à rendre pour demain : Beryl Markham was an extraordinary woman , a heroine. Indeed she managed to win in a closely guarded domain of men : the aviation. She was the first person to cross the Atlantic solo in the East-West in 1936 and roam the african skies. Moreover she had a passion for the race horses and so was a racehorse trainer but also author . All this makes it an adventurous woman, full of daring and guts that make an unusual path maybe because it was a freedom- loving woman. His achievements make her a great heroine. In the text we can read it was too bold, too ambitious and in spite of her member ship in the lower class , she realized an exceptional course because she showed us that her determination and his courage which were use to him to reach her purposes. It's an example of a woman that she started from scratch and reached the top and that nothong is impossible

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  • ton texte est super bien par contre dernier phrase tu as écris "nothong" au lieu de "nothing" mais sinon ton texte est super bien

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