pouvez vous corriger ce texte ? This is the story of a serial killer named Jeremy , but the tabloids cakled him The Rottweiler because his first victim had a ma
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This is the story of a serial killer named Jeremy , but the tabloids cakled him "The Rottweiler" because his first victim had a mark on her neck as if a dog had bitten . A winter evening , xhen Jeremy was walking into Bryanstone and up Saymour Place , in a mews of York Street exactly , he saw a cellephane-wrapped boquet of daffodils lying on the cobled . Suddenly , he memorised ! It was the place where he had killed Nicole Neeems . Indeed , yesterday had been the fist anniversary of her death but Jeremy hadn't forgotten but surprisingly enough , it hadn't meant much to him .
This is the story of a serial killer named Jeremy , but the tabloids cakled him "The Rottweiler" because his first victim had a mark on her neck as if a dog had bitten . A winter evening , xhen Jeremy was walking into Bryanstone and up Saymour Place , in a mews of York Street exactly , he saw a cellephane-wrapped boquet of daffodils lying on the cobled . Suddenly , he memorised ! It was the place where he had killed Nicole Neeems . Indeed , yesterday had been the fist anniversary of her death but Jeremy hadn't forgotten but surprisingly enough , it hadn't meant much to him .
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This is the story of a serial killer named Jeremy , but the tabloids called him "The Rottweiler" because his first victim had a mark on her neck as if a dog had bitten . A winter evening , when Jeremy was walking into Brynstone and up Saymour Place , in a mews of York Street exactly , he saw a cellophane-wrapped bouquet of daffodils lying on the cobble . Suddenly , he memorized ! It was the place where he had killed Nicole Neems . Indeed , yesterday had been the fist anniversary of her death but Jeremy hadn't forgotten but surprisingly enough , it hadn't meant much to him . Ca cest tout que je sait et je suis anglais pl.