Bonjour ,pouvez vous me corriger mon texte s'il vous plait? A few years ago, I visited the Fougère Castle, this Castle is in Vienna,the castle is very old and
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Bonjour ,pouvez vous me corriger mon texte s'il vous plait?
A few years ago, I visited the Fougère Castle, this Castle is in Vienna,the castle is very old and the landscape is very gloomy with a lot of trees, the encounter take place in the living room in front of the chimney
The ghost was propably a girl with a red dress,I don’t know his name,she lived in 1780 and she died in 1830 because she burned alive,she appeared for the first time in 1930 in front of the chimney
A few years ago, I visited the Fougère Castle, this Castle is in Vienna,the castle is very old and the landscape is very gloomy with a lot of trees, the encounter take place in the living room in front of the chimney
The ghost was propably a girl with a red dress,I don’t know his name,she lived in 1780 and she died in 1830 because she burned alive,she appeared for the first time in 1930 in front of the chimney
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1. Réponse Lolilol3102015
coucou alors ce n'est pas is mais WAS vu que c'est du passé : "few years ago"donc take devient took car IRREGULIE
don't devient didn't
his devient her car c'est une fille
j'espère t'avoir aidé
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2. Réponse Lolitaah
I don't Know HER name (c'est une fille)