URGENT19 POINTS Bjr qqun peut me corriger svp merci d'avance When I heard the world family I think about my own family and I am happy with family. I have one si
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Bjr qqun peut me corriger svp merci d'avance
When I heard the world family I think about my own family and I am happy with family. I have one sisters and I live with my parents.
I prefer take time with my family to my friend.
I admire my parents because they succeed in us life. I love my parents because they do their best to help me but sometimes they scold me and rarely punish me.I think it’s normal.
My sister and I help my parents with the housework.
I think I wouldn’t like am only child.
My sister are sometimes sly and stubborn but she is caring with me. Sometimes I fall out with my sisters and I am tired with she but this is the family life. She trust on me and I trust on her.
Later in life, when I leave home to live on my own, I would like bring up a child and share with him the same values that my parents taught me. Also I would like earn a living and get a job.
Finally I’m grateful to my parents, I now I can rely on them and I am proud of my family.
Bjr qqun peut me corriger svp merci d'avance
When I heard the world family I think about my own family and I am happy with family. I have one sisters and I live with my parents.
I prefer take time with my family to my friend.
I admire my parents because they succeed in us life. I love my parents because they do their best to help me but sometimes they scold me and rarely punish me.I think it’s normal.
My sister and I help my parents with the housework.
I think I wouldn’t like am only child.
My sister are sometimes sly and stubborn but she is caring with me. Sometimes I fall out with my sisters and I am tired with she but this is the family life. She trust on me and I trust on her.
Later in life, when I leave home to live on my own, I would like bring up a child and share with him the same values that my parents taught me. Also I would like earn a living and get a job.
Finally I’m grateful to my parents, I now I can rely on them and I am proud of my family.
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1. Réponse justagirl
When I heard the world family I think about my own family and I am happy with them (évite les répétitions). I have one sister ( au singulier car one) and I live with my parents.
I prefer spending time with my family to spending time with my friend.
I admire my parents because they succeed in their life. I love them (répétition) because they do their best to help me but sometimes they scold me and rarely punish me.I think it’s normal.
My sister and I help my parents with the housework.
I think I wouldn’t like to be only child.
My sister is sometimes sly and stubborn but she is caring with me. Sometimes I fall out with my sister and I am tired with her (cod donc il faut utiliser her et pas she) but this is the family life. She trust me and I trust her.
Later in life, when I will leave home to live on my own, I would like bring up a child and share with him the same values that my parents taught me. Also I would like earn a living and get a job.
Finally I’m grateful to my parents, I now I can rely on them and I am proud of my family.
Voilà! Je suis pas sûre d'avoir tt corrigé mais bon :)