Bonsoir, est ce que quelqu'un peut m'aider pour cet exercice d'anglais ci-dessous s'il vous plait?:) Merci beaucoup d'avance!

My name is David aka David X , i used to be a member of the white punishers , I used to fight against other gangs and commit a lot of crimes , I joined a gang because I used to be poor and lack self-esteem, my mom used to work all week long and my dad used to live in pothland , i used to be very bad at school , therefore gang used to be a family to me ...... (Le reste tu le reécrit comme il est )