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Bonjour pouvez vous corriger mon texte en anglais svp ? je ne suis pas super fort en anglais merci de me dire si il y a des erreur. le sujet est d'inventer sont école ideal :

My ideal shool is located in California in silicon valley because it’s hot and there are Google and Apple. There would be studends going in shool in flying bus. The building is brown and white. My ideal shool would be very large and would be shaped castle.The stairs is like in Harry potter because the would be many floor.
In my ideal school the boys have uniforms like gentleman's. their uniforms is classic. The suit is black,the shirt is white,the tie is black or white, the trousers is black or grey and the shoes is black.

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    My ideal school is located in California in silicon valley because it’s hot and there are Google and Apple. There would be students going into school in flying bus. The building is brown and white. My ideal soul would be very large and would be shaped castleThe stairs is like in Harry Potter because they would be many floors.
    In my ideal school the boys have uniforms like gentleman's. their uniforms are classic. The suit is blackthe shirt is whitethe tie is black or white, the trousers are black or grey and the shoes are black.

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