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New York is a big city located on Atlantic coast. I really would like to go there to see lots of monuments. In first, I would like to visit the Statue of Liberty : it's a wonderful monument ! Then, I would like to go to Manhattan to see Central Park : it will be awesome if I could eat there ! Of course, I want to see the Empire State Building. After, I would like to walk in Times Square : it will be a dream. I think, I also would like to go to the Museum of Modern Art. I want to go through the Brooklyn Bridge. Obviously, I would like to meet stars ! 
If I go to New York, I will take lots of photos : it will be forever engraved in my mind !