Please j'ai juste besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes et me dire si j'ai bien respecter les consignes merci d'avance
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Please j'ai juste besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes et me dire si j'ai bien respecter les consignes merci d'avance
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Voil0 à ton texte était bien dans l'ensemble j'ai juste proposé quelques modifications
Hello everybody, How are you ? First of all my name is Chelsea Gough. I'm a scientist, i want to talk to you about global warming , its causes and its current consequences .
Environment surveys show that the Earth surface temperature is rising rapidly , it is called “Global warming”
The amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) and other greenhouse gases like methane, nitrous oxide or fluorinated gases contribute to global warming. The increase of these gas emissions is mostly due to human activities : home heating ; car driving; development of chemical plants .
The consequences of the global warming and also pollution is that the planet is suffering , it is sick, in bad shape, unhealthy and may even be destroyed :seas are rising; storms are more violent; floods are more frequent ; fish and wildlife are threatened : polar bears for example may disappear.
We are destroying our Earth; our planet is menaced
We must therefore mobilize and act quickly to save the planet for the future generations!
There are many things we can do : We can take public transports rather than car ; recycle and reuse as much as we can ; avoid plastic bags ; lower the heating or reduce the air conditioning ;always throw our garbage in a dustbin
It’s simple but globally we can save our planet.
If we do not , we will have to suffer a lot of disasters