Quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger les fautes svp? merciiiii John and Kevin are two friends passionated from bike. K: Hey John J: Hey Kevin, you make many noise
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Quelqu'un pourrait-il me corriger les fautes svp? merciiiii
John and Kevin are two friends passionated from bike.
K: Hey John
J: Hey Kevin, you make many noise with you new bike!
K: Did you see that ? It's new collection of Harley, I made myself a little joy.
J: I look that ; you come at rally saturday ?
K: Well.. I don't no, I've got to keep my children this week, and I have decided to take them in my dad in the countryside to explore the fishing and hunting.
J: Oh no, damage, because saturday we crossing a small part of the famous Road 66. We start in Chicago and we arrive on Oklahoma. We past a one night on 66 Motel. It will bee very fun. You missing something.
K: I'm blast..Your will spend a very nice week-end, but T'm happy to go in my dad. The next week T'm disponible. I'm come with your.
J: Well..Euh.. He doesn't have a exit the next week.
K: Oh damn, It was long time while a didn't see a grup.
J: Do you want walk in dual on other part to Mother Road, can you ?
K: Great ! It's very good idea, I have always dreamed to admire the Riverton landscapesin Kansas
J: Okay, it's fine, past drinking a coffee before.
K: Yes, see you next week John.
J: Yes bye !
John and Kevin are two friends passionated from bike.
K: Hey John
J: Hey Kevin, you make many noise with you new bike!
K: Did you see that ? It's new collection of Harley, I made myself a little joy.
J: I look that ; you come at rally saturday ?
K: Well.. I don't no, I've got to keep my children this week, and I have decided to take them in my dad in the countryside to explore the fishing and hunting.
J: Oh no, damage, because saturday we crossing a small part of the famous Road 66. We start in Chicago and we arrive on Oklahoma. We past a one night on 66 Motel. It will bee very fun. You missing something.
K: I'm blast..Your will spend a very nice week-end, but T'm happy to go in my dad. The next week T'm disponible. I'm come with your.
J: Well..Euh.. He doesn't have a exit the next week.
K: Oh damn, It was long time while a didn't see a grup.
J: Do you want walk in dual on other part to Mother Road, can you ?
K: Great ! It's very good idea, I have always dreamed to admire the Riverton landscapesin Kansas
J: Okay, it's fine, past drinking a coffee before.
K: Yes, see you next week John.
J: Yes bye !
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1. Réponse Hp2001
John and Kevin are two friends passionate from bike.
K: Hey John
J: Hey Kevin, you make many noise with your new bike!
K: Did you see that? It's a new collection of Harley, I made myself a little pleasure.
J: I see; do you come at the rally Saturday?
K: Well, I don't know, I have to keep my children this week, and I decided to take them in the countryside to discover fishing and hunting.
J: Oh, it’s so bad, because Saturday we are crossing a small part of the famous Road 66. We start in Chicago and we arrive at Oklahoma. We stay one night at the 66 Hotel. It will be so funny. You are definitely missing something.
K: I'm sorry. You are going to spend a very nice week-end, but I’m happy to accompany my children. But next week I’m free: I could come with you on bike anywhere, if you want.
J: Well… I am full next week, and I don’t have any time…
K: Oh damn… I didn’t see a group since a long time.
J: Do you want that we ride both in another part of the Mother Road?
K: Great! It's very good idea, I always dreamed to admire the Riverton landscapes in Kansas!
J: Okay, all right. Remember, you’re invited to drink a coffee at house before.
K: Yes, see you next week John.
J: Bye! -
2. Réponse dammit
John and Kevin are two friends passionated about bikesK: Hey John !J: Hey Kevin, you make a lot of noises with your new bike!
K: Did you see that ? It's a new collection from Harley, I offered myself a bit of pleasure.
J: Oh I see ! Are you coming at the rally event this saturday ?
K: Hmm.. I don't know, I have to look after my children this week. Also, I have decided to take them in my dad's at the countryside to explore fishing and hunting.
J: Oh what a shame! This saturday we will cross a small part of the famous Road 66. The start point is in Chicago and the arrival point will be in Oklahoma. We will spend one night in the Motel 66. This Saturday will be very fun and you will be missing it!
K: Oh wow! You sure will spend an amazing week-end! And thanks for inviting me..but, you know, I'm also excited to go in my dad's with my children. The next week I will be available.
J: Well too bad.. I will be very busy next week.
K: Oh..okay, it's fine.. It has been a long time I haven't since i've seen a group.
J: Ah.. maybe some other time.. Oh hey, do you want to walk together in the other part of the Mother Road? What about we do that the week after the next?
K: Yes of course! It's very good idea, I have always dreamed about admiring the Riverton landscapesin Kansas!
J: Okay great! If you want we can go drink a coffee before.
K: alright, see you in two weeks then !
J: Yup! Have a nice day!