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A young American man was called Victor met a beautiful
young Spanish woman was named Camila. They met in a tower
in London (in England) during the night. She had 23 years old
and was the girl of king Oscar IV. Oscar had bought a caste
for himself and he had also bought a tower for Camila. Victor
was a servant of the royal family and groom (for horses).
Moreover, he was feel in love with a young woman besides he
had wanted to meet her.

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  • A young American man who was called Victor met a beautiful 
    young Spanish woman who was named Camila. They met in a tower 
    in London (in England) during the night. She had 23 years old
    and was the girl of king Oscar IV. Oscar had bought a castle
    for himself and he had also bought a tower for Camila. Victor 
    was a servant of the royal family and groom (for horses). 
    Moreover, he fell in love with a young woman besides he wanted to meet her. 

    Que cherches-tu a dire dans ta dernière phrase ?

  • A young American Man called Victor met a beautiful young Spanish woman named Camilia.They've met in a Towen in London without during the night.She was 23 years old and was the girl of the king Oscar IV. The king Oscar had bought a caste for himself and a tower for Camila.Victor worked as a servant for the royal family and the groom. Moreover, he felt in love with the young woman and wanted to meetr her.

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