Bonjour, je dois faire un vidéo pour participer à un casting du jeux survivor. Pouvez vous m'aider pour corriger les fautes d'orthographes et dire ce qu'il manq
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Bonjour, je dois faire un vidéo pour participer à un casting du jeux
survivor.
Pouvez vous m'aider pour corriger les fautes d'orthographes et dire ce
qu'il manqueHello, my name is Yahne, I'm fourteen and I want to participate to the TV
Shows survivorI have thinked to participate to survivor because It's a TV Show right for
meI can stand animals even insects and reptiles. I have some friends, i'm
loyal and they can rely on me.Live in the middle of nowhere doesn't disturb
me and will allow me to prove to my friends what i'm able to do and i think
it would allow me to face my shynessI love discover a new country, with new culture, new landscapesI love the sport,challenge and contest. iI already went in many countries like Tunisia, Reunion, Mauritius,
Mayotte, Madagascar and England.To win, I would be capable to carry a snake but I wouldn't be capable to
eat insects.For me, participate to Survivor is a good experience to grow mentally and
live with other contestants.Please pick me It's a dream for to be a entrant of survivor.
Merci beaucoup
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Bonsoir !
Dans l'ensemble, je dirais que c'est pas mal, mais t'as quelques petites fautes :
Hello, my name is Yahne, I'm fourteen and I want to participate to the TV
Show (sans le "s") survivorI have thought about participating to survivor because It's a TV Show right for
me. I can stand animals even insects and reptiles. I have some friends, i'm
loyal and they can rely on me.Living in the middle of nowhere doesn't disturb
me and will allow me to prove to my friends what i'm able to do and i think
it would allow me to face my shyness. I love discovering a new country, with new culture, new landscapes. I love the sport,challenge and contest. It already went in many countries like Tunisia, Reunion, Mauritius, (J'ai pas trop compris ce que t'as voulu dire ici, explique moi que je puisse t'aider à refaire la phrase ^^')
Mayotte, Madagascar and England.To win, I would be capable to carry a snake but I wouldn't be capable to
eat insects.For me, participating to Survivor is a good experience to grow mentally and
live with other contestants.Please pick me It's a dream for to be an entrant of survivor.
Voilà voilà !
Si t'as des questions hésite pas ! ;)