Bonjour, J’ai une rédaction en anglais à faire. Pourriez-vous me corriger ? J’ai un doute sur la traduction concernant certaines parties de mon texte.Moreover,

Bonjour,

J’ai une rédaction en anglais à faire. Pourriez-vous me corriger ? J’ai un
doute sur la traduction concernant certaines parties de mon texte.Moreover, faced with these impressive and surprising progress, human is
only spectator, but entirely actor of this technology.
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Scientists have make a breakthrough.
They will soon succeed in curing a patient severely affected by
the depression, through neuroscience. Such scientific feats show how
technology can succeed in advancing the medical field and cure diseases.
Science is thus able to perform great technological prowess.
But these advances have very positive impacts into the medical field, they
can also have negative effects in the long term. What are they?
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We saw the new technological revolutions through science. It continues to
move forward in technology. But we also saw how the impacts of these
technologies, if they are poorly mastered, can be negative.

Merci beaucoup pour la correction.